03.05.06

The Silver Spell: First Post (First Impressions)

Posted in Childrens, Fiction at 6:04 am by web

I can’t decide how I feel about the beginning yet. Again I have to wonder about the kids and the townspeople. There is clearly mind-affecting enchantments affecting various people, so why doesn’t anyone ever notice? And Zendric being called away felt awfully convenient. Hopefully the book will fix a lot of these problems (or show me that they aren’t problems)! I really want this book to be good!

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