08.31.06

The Amazing Zonk Wizardry: Fourth Post (Unimportant Facts)

Posted in Fiction, Teen at 2:57 am by Rosepixie

The Amazing Zonk WizardryHoochie’s super-son is magically going to save her life! This story is so bizarre. It spends so much time focusing on stupid, unimportant parts of the story too. Why do we care if a couple of Navy pilots took pictures of them flying? If it comes up again, fine, but I have little faith that it will. I’m slightly annoyed that Hoochie’s husband’s name keeps changing. Clearly this wasn’t edited very well at all! I mean, a fairly major character’s name keeps changing! It’s quite disconcerting!

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