11.26.06
Addy Saves the Day: Thoughts
The story so far is fairly good, although quite simple. I find the dialect kind of annoying primarily because it feels only half done, like the author is trying to suggest that Addy and her family have a specific dialect without really writing in it. I’d much rather she had actually used it. I can see why she wouldn’t want to, given the skill level of the readers, but then she should have just dropped it altogether. It’s frustrating and annoying as it is.