11.26.06
Addy Saves the Day: More Thoughts
This was a good story, but it ended really suddenly! A short chapter at the end wrapping things up and dealing with the sudden, miraculous appearance of Sam might have been good. It just felt really sudden. The plot with Harriet was well done and the theft was handled well, although some acknowledgment of why the girl was stealing all the money would have been good. There were just a few weird loose ends. One more chapter would have been nice.